If you could live anywhere, where would it be? You could live practically anywhere if you were invisible, and be safe!
Well I can tell you that I would live in a mall! Because if you live in a mall you would have everything you need to survive. If I lived in a mall, I would probably just sit in Shopper's Drug Mart, and eat all the food, that they have in the food section. If I ever felt like I just needed to relax I could go into Chapters and wait for someones star bucks to appear on the "Pick Up Food Here" counter, and quickly sprinkle some "Invisible Dust" on it. I would have a free drink, to enjoy while, the person whose drink it was, freaks out!
And at night I would sneak into the security guards office and get their keys that open all of the stores.While they are stunned as they are watching the doors to the store unlock, and running to them, I would go and get whichever clothes I wanted, and sprinkle some of my "Invisible Dust" on them.
The best part is that I will never get caught because the security cameras couldn't pick up any signals. I would keep the guards on their toes! I would have them running to practically every store in the mall, every night!
And when the mall is open I would wash off the invisible dust, in a very unoccupied ladies rooms. I could walk around the mall just like a normal person, until night time strikes again! Wouldn't it be bad if I forgot to put "Invisible Dust" on some random part of my body? Then I would look like just a pair of random hands or feet, floating around the mall! One of the best parts is that I could pull pranks on people! I could walk up behind someone and yell, "BOO!"
Oh the fun I would have, if I were invisible living in the mall.
I really liked your ideas and how they went into detail.I liked that you would play pranks on people and steal peoples starbucks, but I do think you could have gone into more detail about some of your topics.
ReplyDeleteoverall I would give you a 4 1/2
ReplyDeleteI really liked your ideas and the story kept me interested! It was very creative and differnt from any other I read, and your ideas were original. I think you could've just picked a couple of ideas and stuck with them, but I think overall it would be a 4.5/5. Good job!!
ReplyDeleteLike the living in a Mall part and the "Dust",good topic and detail just like frodo 4.5 all the way...
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