My sister is the most gullible person you would ever meet. She believes anything that you tell her. And this Aprils fool's was the best day of my life.
I have always been interested in magic, so my sister wasn't surprised when I told her I wanted to show her my new trick. She was so excited to see it! Little did she know, she was in for a wet surprise.
I waited till my parents went grocery shopping, then I started my trick. I took a glass bowl and filed it with water. I put a few drops of blue dye in it for the "affect". I told her that I needed a piece of her hair. She wasn't very willing since she just got it done, but she gave it to me anyway. I put some hotsauce, sugar and some sprinkles in it, with the soap in it already. I had told her that i needed the soap to keep the magic pure and clean. Like I said, she believes ANYTHING! Finally my magic trick was ready. I told her to take the bowl and stand on the chair with the broomstick, holding it up. She was in the perfect position. "Oh man I forgot something! I will be right back! Stay there and don't move! It could ruin the trick." I told her.
About three hours later while my sister was still up there yelling my name and wondering where I went, I heard a loud crash! Haha I got her! I walked into the kitchen finding a very wet and very blue sister with a mad expression on her face. She swore that she was going to kill me, but I didn't care, it was totally worth it!
I liked the creativity and how you stuck to 1 topic, Also I did not notice any spelling errors and was somewhat long 5/5.
ReplyDeleteit was very creative, and well organized. It was pretty interesting and I liked the ending.. 4.5/5
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